Re-Visiting Dora (again)
While
reading the Dora article there were a few things that caught my attention when
it came to the teachers teaching methods and how Dora applied what she was
being told. Reading through the lens of
the day to day contact, focusing on what the learning steps were for Dora and
better understanding why it was necessary for the steps to happen the way they
did made understanding what works a lot easier.
When it
came down to the teacher’s day to day actions with Dora they made sure that
they respected and acknowledged the natural progression of what it would take
to get Dora on the right path for her writing development. The teacher
also does a good job of complimenting her natural progression and encouraging
her to move forward(COMPOUNDED SUBJECT WITH TWO OR MORE PERSONAL
PROMOUNS. ALSO IM NOT SURE IF IM RIGHT HERE) Even when she was just
acknowledging that letters go together to make words and sounds was a step in
the right direction and allowed her to naturally progress to the next stages on
her own without being stifled. From what I saw when the teacher did step in,
she did so in a fashion that asked for the student to observe what it is she
needed to work on next. The teacher, who is to encourage and cultivate a learning environment
were the students are able to rely on one another to help build their own
skills with collaboration, does so by providing her students with different
tools, such as a mentor text, for guidance. Not only did this interaction
better the teachers ability to assess the point they’re at in their writing
development it allows them the ability to asses theirs as well. Dora and her classmates were given enough
freedom to explore their sentence syntax while still having some guidance and a
steady frame work to help make themselves better. The teacher then follows that up by reassuring them when
something is done correctly making for a very strong writing technique in my
opinion.
When
it comes to how Dora picks up these concepts I think it’s natural that she had
some difficulty with it. Turning sentence fluency and production and creating
your own syntax into something that becomes a habit for you is something that
takes time and practice. It’s hard to be able to pick up on the proper use of
where punctuation should be placed and its
purpose and the fact that Dora always keeps trying to push forward is a success
in itself. Another way to look at how long it took her is that the teacher
never truly gives her a direct “rule” she has to follow but instead encourages
her to observe and build those writing rules for herself, which makes the time
it takes her acceptable when she’s developing something from scratch(IT
ALSO SEEMED TO BENEFIT DORA THAT SHE WAS NEVER GIVEN A DIRECT “RULE” SHE HAS TO
FOLLOW BUT INSTEAD IS ENOURAGED TO OBSERVE AND BUILD THOSE WRITING RULES FOR
HERSELF. BEING ABLE TO DEVELOP THISE RULES TAKES TIME MAKING IT FAR MORE
ACCEPTABLE IN MY EYES THAT SHE MAY NOT BE CATCHING ON ALL THAT QUICKLY.)
Instead of being given an archetype to follow, she’s given the opportunity to
build her own and test out the boundaries making her ability to latch on to
these concepts a little stronger or so it seems to me.
Hey Savanah,
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post, but I noticed a few things. First of all, (and I could be wrong here) I think that the first sentence you bolded with the compounded subject is actually an example of a sentence with a compounded verb. Additionally, I did not see examples of the other POWs marked in your blog. I see that in the second to last sentences of your first paragraph (Dora and her classmates...) you have a compounded subject, but it is not marked. Good job using who and changing your weak transitive verbs, but don't forget to include the other patterns of the week and label what they are!